Paper 2 thoughts

I've been thinking about my own draft for project 2 and I have to tell you that, this was a very hard project shakespear is no easy work to decipher. Comparing a sonnet to the play having to put the words of the sonnet into a mouth of one of the characters was very hard.
1. My purpose was to show the contradictions of Benedict not jus that but how the sonnet I chose was related to his love speech about beatrice.
2. I feel that my writing was only seclusion for our lass because I did not give relative information about the entire play, I only gave enough information so that my class mates would know what I am talking about
3. 3 rhetorical moves
I. Sonnet 1 how Benedick can relate his love speech
II. When benedick needs fuel for his love sonnet one describes love as a flame needing fuel
III. Benedick NASA hunger for love from a child as the sonnet says love is a hunger that can cause famine

4. I was a bit repetitious with the concept of love and benedicks speech about Beatrice

5. I think I Should try to relate more of the situation in the play to Benedict's speech because of almost the vague or repetitious behavior I had when writing this paper drafting